Kay Kay

Wow! I loved it a lot...I can't wait to hear more of your stuff...everytime I read something by you it makes me want to write poems..silly isn't it? lol

Yeah it was really really good. Sam when did you join RK? I critted their stuff so they better crit mine.

Wow! Your song was really good...even though rap isn't really my thing I thought you did a very good job.

I thought the song was okay...better than what I could have done...LOL! My lyrics are crap. :twisted:

Ignore the whole quote thing I don't know how I did that. LOL i'm so stupid.

[quote="Kay Kay"][pre]We learned to live together as a happy couple with our handyman who had no idea that I had become Jessie’s Suzy again. Even, though, Jessie thought that I ...

You think this is bad? Wait till like the next couple of chapters...it's about to get worse.

Thanx for critting. You'll be surprised as to what happens in the next couple of chapters. :D :D :D

Good idea!

Yeah it makes complete sense to me. I can relate to this. I didn't see many errors at all. Good job!

She held onto the towel until Jessie pushed her down.

Thanx guys!

Well that's cuz I don't know when the time is except 18th Century...I guess maybe the 1700's. LOL

I liked it alot. I think that you described things well and can't wait to read more. By the way how are things going on our co-write?

Does anyone think I should change the title to my story? Yes or No? If yes then what do you suggest?